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Friday, November 4, 2011

Offering

Picture Courtesy: Dear friend and loved one, Aby.
You can see more of his clicks here: abclicks.blogspot.com


Waking up in the dead of the night
looking for a light to shine.
A light to show the way.
Through the dark corridors
and half closed doors-
careful, planned tip toeing.
Shouldn't wake you up
shouldn't break your dream.
Shouldn't let that peaceful
smile of yours leave.
Dead of the night,
howling dogs afar,
owls, bats and stars unseen.
The careful breathing
the sightless search,
dead of the night
without a light to shine.
Mindless wanderings,
insomniac longings.
All
for the heaven,
the Jannah,
of a midnight smoke. 

9 comments:

Morning said...

haunting, beautiful imagery,

wow.

kittz1326 said...

Thank you! :) 

The Orange Tree said...

what a charming piece, love the imagery and wording.
Happy Rally.

Julie Laing said...

The last line of this piece is fabulous--it's the perfect ending for the picture you're painting here. Thanks for sharing this one for the rally.

Janaki Nagaraj said...

A twist in the end...nice.

kittz1326 said...

Thanks! :) 

kittz1326 said...

Thank you for dropping by! :) 

kittz1326 said...

Thank you! Happy rally. :) 

Andy said...

Hello.
WoW! Such vivid imagery.
Nicely done!
Thanks for sharing.

A Weeping Rose

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